Comments on: 11 Days http://tovopoetry.wordpress.com/2007/11/01/11-days/ ~ ~ ~ My Spirit Emotions Raw and Unedited ~ ~ ~ Thu, 22 Jan 2009 08:00:51 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: johnnypeepers http://tovopoetry.wordpress.com/2007/11/01/11-days/#comment-544 johnnypeepers Wed, 12 Dec 2007 20:20:19 +0000 http://tovopoetry.wordpress.com/2007/11/01/11-days/#comment-544 You will be blessed whatever happens to you. 11 days from now or 11 years, it does not matter. Bless you and your message. You will be blessed whatever happens to you. 11 days from now or 11 years, it does not matter. Bless you and your message.

]]> By: Sonu http://tovopoetry.wordpress.com/2007/11/01/11-days/#comment-494 Sonu Sat, 01 Dec 2007 06:37:57 +0000 http://tovopoetry.wordpress.com/2007/11/01/11-days/#comment-494 It's a wonderful poem. Simplistic by nature yet quite meaningful. Keep up the good work. http://sonalismrules.wordpress.com It’s a wonderful poem. Simplistic by nature yet quite meaningful. Keep up the good work.

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]]> By: subham http://tovopoetry.wordpress.com/2007/11/01/11-days/#comment-487 subham Wed, 28 Nov 2007 18:53:32 +0000 http://tovopoetry.wordpress.com/2007/11/01/11-days/#comment-487 AS FAITH O TRUST as today is the day to harvest the moon as I am reasoned yet blosom by the dream the day i passed by is lost to dream again and day ahead of mine not mine yet to curse and I embrace the day as blue to the sky with the waves in blood reasoned by oceanic blue when I do exist upon the earth with the dusts in my hands the very dusts of love , beauty and bliss as I believed by the trust when resourced by the faith of love as I move to the voices of melody bestirred by love you simly sneaks to me within being blazoned by the faith and the footings when rocked by the faith of the trust AS FAITH O TRUST

as today is the day to harvest the moon
as I am reasoned yet blosom by the dream
the day i passed by is lost to dream again
and day ahead of mine not mine yet to curse

and I embrace the day as blue to the sky
with the waves in blood reasoned by oceanic blue
when I do exist upon the earth with the dusts in my hands
the very dusts of love , beauty and bliss as I believed
by the trust when resourced by the faith of love

as I move to the voices of melody bestirred by love
you simly sneaks to me within being blazoned by the faith
and the footings when rocked by the faith of the trust

]]> By: dreamsbyraul http://tovopoetry.wordpress.com/2007/11/01/11-days/#comment-486 dreamsbyraul Wed, 28 Nov 2007 16:10:56 +0000 http://tovopoetry.wordpress.com/2007/11/01/11-days/#comment-486 Now I'm curious about what happened on November 12th. Interesting that you wrote this poem about 11 on the 1st and that eleven more days happens to be the 12th. 12 is a lucky number and the B-day of the person I started my blog for in the first place. Hmmm. Love your stuff. Now I’m curious about what happened on November 12th. Interesting that you wrote this poem about 11 on the 1st and that eleven more days happens to be the 12th. 12 is a lucky number and the B-day of the person I started my blog for in the first place. Hmmm. Love your stuff.

]]> By: 2ndhandsoul http://tovopoetry.wordpress.com/2007/11/01/11-days/#comment-394 2ndhandsoul Wed, 07 Nov 2007 21:01:40 +0000 http://tovopoetry.wordpress.com/2007/11/01/11-days/#comment-394 I have been seeing 11:11 and other strange series of numbers when checking the time for a while now. Not so much now as before, but still oddly co-inciding. I have been seeing 11:11 and other strange series of numbers when checking the time for a while now. Not so much now as before, but still oddly co-inciding.

]]> By: Kevin Olsen http://tovopoetry.wordpress.com/2007/11/01/11-days/#comment-390 Kevin Olsen Tue, 06 Nov 2007 19:14:19 +0000 http://tovopoetry.wordpress.com/2007/11/01/11-days/#comment-390 I enjoyed the lack of punctuation. I enjoyed the repetition and constant comparison. It will take me awhile to digest though (which, by the way is a compliment). http://kevinolsenpoet.wordpress.com/poetry/ I enjoyed the lack of punctuation. I enjoyed the repetition and constant comparison. It will take me awhile to digest though (which, by the way is a compliment).

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]]> By: Sara http://tovopoetry.wordpress.com/2007/11/01/11-days/#comment-381 Sara Sat, 03 Nov 2007 17:13:58 +0000 http://tovopoetry.wordpress.com/2007/11/01/11-days/#comment-381 This part was my favorite: 11 days One and one is two Simplistic by nature A grade schooler will understand and I liked how you repeated 11 daya over and over in this piece. This part was my favorite:
11 days

One and one is two

Simplistic by nature

A grade schooler will understand

and I liked how you repeated 11 daya over and over in this piece.

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