11 Days
November 1, 2007 by engtovo
11 more days
Until what is unknown
The number pops into mind
Undefined
Leaving me to wonder
Ponder
Not a week
Not two
Why does instinct taunt me so
Will I just wait
Will I attempt to figure out my clue
Matters not
The outcome will be the same
11 days
A master number
Symbolic of spiritual event
11 days
One and one is two
Simplistic by nature
A grade schooler will understand
A joining
A reflection of duality
Perhaps a balancing of male and female
The clue is lacking
Day count
T minus 11
Engtovo ~ October 31, 2007
This part was my favorite:
11 days
One and one is two
Simplistic by nature
A grade schooler will understand
and I liked how you repeated 11 daya over and over in this piece.
I enjoyed the lack of punctuation. I enjoyed the repetition and constant comparison. It will take me awhile to digest though (which, by the way is a compliment).
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I have been seeing 11:11 and other strange series of numbers when checking the time for a while now. Not so much now as before, but still oddly co-inciding.
Now I’m curious about what happened on November 12th. Interesting that you wrote this poem about 11 on the 1st and that eleven more days happens to be the 12th. 12 is a lucky number and the B-day of the person I started my blog for in the first place. Hmmm. Love your stuff.
AS FAITH O TRUST
as today is the day to harvest the moon
as I am reasoned yet blosom by the dream
the day i passed by is lost to dream again
and day ahead of mine not mine yet to curse
and I embrace the day as blue to the sky
with the waves in blood reasoned by oceanic blue
when I do exist upon the earth with the dusts in my hands
the very dusts of love , beauty and bliss as I believed
by the trust when resourced by the faith of love
as I move to the voices of melody bestirred by love
you simly sneaks to me within being blazoned by the faith
and the footings when rocked by the faith of the trust
It’s a wonderful poem. Simplistic by nature yet quite meaningful. Keep up the good work.
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You will be blessed whatever happens to you. 11 days from now or 11 years, it does not matter. Bless you and your message.